As the day passed I looked out
At the gleaming sky
I was truly lost
Lost between the clouds of dark
Away from life
Over dark mountains
Drenched with rain of tears.
Anyone up here?
Anyone to give me a hand
Wake me up
From my soul.
I am growing numb
In the rain of sorrow
Help me out, out from the dark
Get me out before I am a sad mark
The lightning flashed
The silver light on the darkness
Help me out , I cried
From the world of dark.
Within a flash , I see me now
Standing on my door step
Far from the snatching hands of dark
And safe with the hands of life.
27 comments:
this is a beautiful poem!!
Hi! I want to thank you for your visit to my blog and for your words. You're so kind. I posted another Angelina Jolie Bag if wanna to see... What a beautiful poem. Did you write that? Congratulations!!!
Kisses
Jane
Fantastic presentation. I could literally see the lightning through the dark sky. The picture is very apt to the content of the poem. Well done Femin.
Very nice poem:) Thank you for visiting my blog:):)
I made it, wonderful poetry and the pictures.....amazing. Thank you for inviting me here.
Thank you for the invitation to visit. It would be wonderful if you could write a poem for my blog "The Pink Bandanna". I have tried, but I get "lost" in the sadness. How about that for a title. I will be sure to visit again.
Jim
Very impressive!
I love your work here!
do you have any CEO poems?
Beautiful poem, Susan. A lot going on in it.
Thank you for visiting my blog.
Blessings,
Renie
nice...
so nice and sweet words...
Hi Susan :)
Very interesting poem!
Sometimes dark clouds and lightning bring sadness and gloom and is a harbinger of a downpour and deluge.
If you are living in a town like Kochi, the roads get flooded and driving becomes extremely difficult.
Many thanks for sharing this lovely poem and an amazing photo.
Have a wonderful day :)
Hi Susan,
Thanks for visiting my blog and inviting me to share yours. This poem (and picture) are an adventure in emotions. It left me with questions and hope.
God bless,
Fred
Hello,
thank you for your visit and comment.
I love your beautiful poems.
- Cheers.
Nice Picture, with pretty text...
This blog is very "precious"...
Have a good day !
hey! thats some good poetry there!
A real good one :)
Nice...
There is some1 out there. When we ask for help, His hand does come.
thank you so much for ur nice word on my travel's blog :D
You have nice collection blogs..;)
hi Susan...
thank you for stopping by...
anyway, your blog really amazing too..I like to read every poems you write..good work ....
keep writing
Wow awesome work of literature. Simply gr8. Thanks a ton for leaving comments and redirecting me here.
Loved it !
And the concluding lines beautifully add to the stupendous effect your verses create.
Have a gr8 day.
Thanks for your visit to my blog! Come back any time! :-)
Beautiful poetry you have here!
You write good poem, Susan.
Thanks for visiting my blog.
sweet depth of anguish
overcome me and raise me
as buoy overcomes the draw
of the depths of the sea...
this is soooo lovely!
Hello Susan,
I just got to visit your blog, and enjoyed reading some of your poetry. As for my blog...it is only the Lord that gives me the strength day by day to do the tasks which He asks. He has called us to share the gospel with the folks of Brazil. We are very excited about getting there, and we are now going around to different church raising the needed funds. I appreciate your interest in our work. Thanks for visiting our blog!
Esther
Thankyou for visiting my blog and inviting me over to see all of your fabulous creations on all of your blogs :)
Thank you for visiting theVintageNest. You have some amazing blogs. I was enthralled with the veggie, pencil and nature photographs.
Lovely and the lightning with hand is very special.
You choose very nice photos to illistrate4 your poems.
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