Tuesday, May 26, 2009

A Night Splash



Every mean day in our lives
We so trip to a magical world
Which is not far… far away
Just within our mind it lies

We don’t see ourselves in all
Nor the things all around
Deep in a world of our minds
Sleep ! .. We lay thus all away

Let the moon shine bright high
And the stars twinkle for mighty night
Only us to trip to the magical splash
Till we reach the morning bright

There then smells blooming buds
Yup ! The sun has risen up
So then the magical world closes away
To leave us fresh for the morning here

27 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

I like the idea of being in a nightly magical world and waking up fresh to a new day!

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

So wonderfully written Susan, I enjoyed the read very much,
Hope you are well.

Yvonne.

the poet manque said...

wonderful:)


night is my fav time of the day

Creativity!! said...

Beautiful Poem Dear :) Very well pen down:) Thanks a lot for sharing :D

Krishanu said...

Beautiful concept you have developed here...when I was small I used to believe all in angels & fairies but slowly the make-believe thoughts disappeared. That feeling made me love your poem even more...

Marja said...

I am all in the stars and a magical world in my mind lately and than I read all these amazing poems. What a coincedence

Arv said...

those are the times that I wish that the dawn never breaks... :)

take care mate... loved this one :)

cheers...

Illeen said...

Beautiful lines..It feels good to wake up after a nice dream. :)

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Susan:)

The photo is magical and alluring. Wonderful selection to match your lovely poem.

We need to get into that magical world to refresh ourselves for the onslaught of the next days struggles.

We need that diversion to relax and strengthen our mind and body.
After all we are not machines not to be affected by the days stress and strains of work.

This is why many people go to the movies, because movies take them to a world different from our own real world.

I admire the style of your poem written beautifully to convey a lovely message.

Have a nice day Susan:) But live in the magical world in the night:)
Joseph

deeps said...

wow! thats beautifully done..
this one sure does
leave everyone fresh
throughout the day ...

Priya said...

Very true;))

Debbie said...

I love a magical anything!

cyclopseven said...

A moment that lies within each. Nicely expressed.

Cat said...

night is magical!

Counselormama said...

Your poems are great! The pics you post with them are so amazing!

manivannan said...

Wonderfully expressed Susan. It made a beautiful read!

Thanks for visiting my space!

Cheers!!!

Sniffles and Smiles said...

I love the image of magic that you have intertwined with sleep...just lovely! Thanks for visiting! I always enjoy visiting your blog (s)! ~Janine XO

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Salute said...

Nicely written, and thanks for commenting on my blog.

B Shihab said...

Beautiful lines..

Nihal said...

I think dreams are a good sing, a sing of hope for even in chaos, there is always hope:)

When I wake up upon an unfinished dream how it makes me feel like to miss second half the part of the story:)

Again I like to express my appreciation of such a nice work Susan.

magiceye said...

absolutely!

LarryG said...

its a joy to read this refreshing work!
Wonderfully done...

Tickled pink said...

very beautiful, very fresh, wonderful use of imagery mmmmm loved it."magical splash" is a purple patch.

The Muse said...

applause....
and admiration!

Margaret Cloud said...

I guess I never thought of the dream world as being magical, but I will now. The picture is so pretty, adds a nice touch. I like the way you put it in your poem. Thank you for coming by.

ARTIST said...

Actually.. the poem has this soft breeze.. imagery which makes you feel the poem. Sth typical of Frost's work.Great job indeed.