How natural some things are
We don’t know when it does
We go along with it
Just like a leaf caught in wind
Watch how plain is the sky
How full filled is the earth
How dark is a night
And how bright is a day.
All it appears to be packed well
For each and every long song, days
All of a day gives such a lot
Nothing out of full is left out.
Well then each, every moment
Our life, is a long trip
Just to enjoy as long as
Watch just to see, we could !!.
22 comments:
Fantastic Poem Dear :D Excellent!! Keep It Up!!!!!!!!!
Great post and lovely words reminding us to be watchful.
Great post and lovely words reminding us to be watchful.
Hey Susan
Very lovely poem.Liked that comparison you made with a leaf caught in a wind.very thoughtful and nice like your other poems.
nice to have you back.
I enjoyed your poem very much!
A great poem Susan, made excellent reading. keep up the good work.
Yvonne.
Very evocative poem. We sometimes are the happiest when blown along like a leaf. When we think of each day, there is always something good in it, right?
Beautiful! I especially love the comparison to a leaf trapped by the wind.
Hi Susan:)
Lovely poem with an amazing photo.
Most of the time we float like a leaf and let things happen to us. We don't take the time to watch and see and enjoy.
The sky, the earth, the night and the day are all beautiful and have their own attraction. But we can enjoy the beauty only if we open our minds. Most of the time we are preoccupied with many other things and therefore we miss the heavenly glory.
Have a nice day Susan:)
Joseph
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Manjari
This is awesome. Seriously. I love it.
yes.. wish watch we could!!
nice one.. small and perfect!
keep writing:))
A great poem about our lives!
........Our life, is a long trip
Just to enjoy as long as................
nice lines
hope to see you on my blog. i think u didnt forget ur old frnd
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WOW! That was a heartwarming poem, I must say. And of course a wonderful reminder too. Truly amazing!
Keep them coming :)
aroha
My first visit and am impressed with your blogThat is well written poem.Thanks for dropping in my blog.
Hi Susan
Your blog is interesting. Wl surely be reading all the posts in it.
ANd thanks for stopping by my blog and posting appreciative comments.
Have a great day
Yes, life is a trip we should enjoy inspite of all the difficulties. A good poem conveying the message well.
Best wishes :)
Ayesha
Lovely poem. I will visit again soon.
o h my god ...
you surealy need to come to kerala ....
you will have another idea pouring down
Very creative. More of us need to be quiet and watch. D
This is indeed very relaxing, the photo and depiction is bliss.
Please keep writing.
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