Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Well Deserved !!!

Every thing you need
Will not be yours
Some just can be
But some never could be

If you did not get the desired
Then is not deserved by you
This is a simple fact or reason
That makes you happy or sad

You may get the one not deserved
Because you desire for it much
Desire brings what not deserved
But what we deserve won’t bring desire

There our life is truly engulfed in
With two facts desire and deserve
These are ones which build a life
Whether smart or shy could it be

27 comments:

chubskulit said...

sometimes life is full of desire but God always give us what we really deserve.

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Words that are so very true.
I enjoyed the poem very much. well done.


Yvonne.

pughy said...

Very true those words. Thank you so much for dropping by my blog, I love to get vsitors.

Hugs GJ xx

Heatherlyn said...

Sometimes, we desire most that which will not bring us happiness. And sometimes we get things we really don't deserve, for good or bad. So maybe desire and deserving both have nothing to do with happiness.

Creativity!! said...

such a beautiful, awesome poem:) i really liked it:) especially, eye catching phrases, desires & deserves:)
Excellent..Keep It Up:)

CDB said...

Very interesting sentiment indeed; I enjoyed this.

Thanks for popping by earlier!

septembermom said...

It's great when our desire turns out to be what all believe we deserve! I enjoyed visiting your blog and reading your poetry!!

Natural Moments said...

Maybe it comes down to belief. ?

Do we fully believe that our desires and wishes will come true.

Perhaps if we believe we deserve something, we have met certain criteria or hoops that we have ourselves jump through in order to allow our desires to come true?

For instance, many people believe in suffering, therefore they suffer. They stop suffering when they pull themselves up and out of the idea of suffering through what ever means we dictate for ourselves. Did we desire to suffer? I think we did on a deep unconscious level. Did we deserve to suffer? It depends on what rules and beliefs we live by.

Just food for thought.

the poet manque said...

the only thng i cn say is TRUE
Hats of coz u worded the mst cmplx emotions

Merle said...

Dear Femin Susan ~~ Thank you for your comments on my blog, glad you enjoy reading it.
I liked quite a few of your poems
too and will be back to read some more later. Take care, Love, Merle.

rightonmom said...

You're a wonderful poet, the words just flow so well. kudos!

Thanks so much for stopping by my blog yesterday. I really enjoyed my visit here, will be back, :)

Janice Thomson said...

If we just live in the moment desire and deserving are moot points.
Thought-provoking post Susan.

Think Tank said...

no -o ..u din't get something u desired becoz u din't try hard enuf

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Susan :)

Beautiful poem. You have really used the words DESIRE and DESERVE very effectively and conveyed a wonderful message.

Great philosophy!

Have a good day, Susan :)
Joseph

Judy said...

Your poetry is as beautiful as your photos. You are very talented.

Opus #6 said...

Nicely said!

FCB said...

Hi Susan,
I like this, it makes one think about desire, the emotion that has brought ruin to so many. I hadn't thought about it the way you wrote here, hmmmmm, something to think about.
God bless,
Fred

shri ramesh sadasivam said...

//If you did not get the desired
Then is not deserved by you//

I think you have a very valuable point here. Instead of desiring for many things, if we keep working to the best of our efforts we will become well deserved.

Renie Burghardt said...

Something to think about! I enjoyed your poem.

Happy Monday!

Renie

Debbie said...

And life is so much sweeter when we can tell the difference between these two, isn't it?

dreamscapes said...

very true thoughts nicely expressed with an nice picture accompanying it :D

-Aiz.

indianboy said...

There will be always desires in human heart. We only have to work a little hard and sincerely to ensure that what we deserve is what is our desire.

indianboy said...

You wrote in my blog that you feel "sorry seeing all this". I am a little confused here. Is it my blog that made you feel sorry or something else?

venus66 said...

Very well put and the picture is beautiful.

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Thanks Susan for dropping by, much appreciated.
Hope you have a Happy Easter.

Yvonne.

Nihal said...

Hi Susan,
Enchanting words behind the poem, and I'm pretty agree with it. I've ever wanted to be a gal with some writing poetry skills, but no, I can't. I'm given very strong math skills:)
Anyway no any problem, here bloggyland offers me great food for thought, inspiring poems from talented pens like yours.

Now I'm going to read other poems.

Spring Greetings & Howdy from Istanbul~

Cat said...

great creativity here - liked this poem alot!