Between the gleaming stars
On the dark sky
There is a cheerful face
That spreads a dim light
To lead us in the night
He shines nightly
With a dim shade of yellow
Like those of a candle
And guides the earth
Surrounded by darkness
Into the holy path of heaven.
He curves and bends
Like an old man
And at one last night
He disappears
From the night sky
Leaving it strange
Without his presence
But we have a hope
He would come again
With his gleaming face
That pleases all.
32 comments:
hi susan u blog is awesum keep up the gud work....nd hey after the poems nd colors of life no blog y??
u hav gud thoughts do keep writing....
tks
people often tend to confuse good poetry with good vocabulary...
i found your poems thoughtful and insightful....
keep posting!!
p.s. the layout is little difficult to get adjusted to... hw about keeping poems on the right side instesd of left... just a suggestion :-)
on the left side.. sorry not the right one!
Thank you for your visit on my blog and your nice comment... You make me smile!! How I cope - just because I love to do this...
I'm stunned by your beautiful picture, really lovely....
I have already visit your other blog, and the picture are superb :o)
Have a nice day!!!
So good......
Hi,thanks for the compliments of my blog, Informarte Blog. Your blog is great too. Good luck for you. Bye.
lovely poem...glad to know u
Hi Susan.
Thank you for tour comment in my blog.
I think that your blog is very nice, I liked it very much.
Hi Susan,
Lovely poems, beautiful pictures. I shall return.
Blessings,
Renie
Hello, First excuse me for my so bad english. I am really happy to have a brand new comment on my blog. So, i visit yours with a very great surprise. And I see that your regards on the tiny things in our World in the "Colors of Joy" seems like mine. When spirits are connected, let's have better life and better world. Keep on dreaming. Keep writing good words...
Metoo the teddy bear of : http://metoo-le-nounours.blogspot.com/
hey. this is food addict from hard to chew. i love ur poems:)they are very insightful. keep it up!
thanks for ur comment!
do feel free to contact me at hard.to.chew@hotmail.com
p.s: i only came up with the bad food idea due to .. bad food ;)and i can only cope cuz i seriously love food =) and i cant stand bad food.
cherrios
Thank you Susan for your comments on my blog
No se ingles, pero gracias por tu visita a mi blog
Hi Susan! Really loved your blog...this particular post 'A Nightly Companion for a moment reminded me a bit about the famous poem by Alfred Noyes - 'The Highwayman'. Simply amazing!
...your Blog ist nice and your fotos wonderful,....I like!
Greetings Grye Owl
You wrote really great poems but sometimes I can understand them well,after all English is not my mother tongue.
I'm always seeking for postcard swappers worldwide, so til now I have a big collection.
Susan, why don't you join www.blogcatalog.com it's good for you, i see you have a good write in poem......i put you in my blog roll, keep up a good post
Thanks for comment on me
You can!
You write well :) Thanks for droppin by my blog.. Hope to see you there again
thanks for your visit...
nice stuff you have here...i like it how they are accompanied with the pictures...brings more depth and meaning to what you have written
keep up with it
regards
Ana
hi Susan. Thanks for you visit, but i dont speak much english, i trying :) Your blogg is nice.
Hello !
Thanks for your visite at my blog.
This nightly companion make my nights very bad.
Very beautiful pictures and nice poem.
thanks for that comment...n u've got an amazin blog...so gud...awesome...do keep writing...
Susan I have now translate your comment in my blogg! Thanks, you make my happy.
I love you poem, and I will return too your blogg for reding more!
Hugs Lene
Hi! thanx for your visit : )
we adores your poems! very nice!
do y speek in portuguese?
bye bye!
Hello Susan, thanks for the comment. In fact I created this blog to concentrate some images and texts artistically interesting. The universe of art is phenomenal, I try to spoon a little of what I see. I visited your blog and liked meters of his poems ...
Bjs
This one can relate to my resent post at my blog : ), The Globe
these are beautiful pictures!!
Your poetry is inspiring, the photos too. Since Portugal, lots of happiness.
thanks for dropping by dear. its really nice of u. u makes my day. nice poem dear. beautiful :). cheers!
Oi Susan!
Que lindas imagens,
parabéns!
Tenha um belo início de semana,
beijos!
Esme
Hi Susan!
What beautiful pictures,
congratulations!
Have a nice beginning of the week,
kisses!
Esme
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