Wednesday, October 8, 2008

A Joyful Day

The sun shone
As the morning born
With its twilight

Which lighted my might

It shone the rays
To my little face

To wake me up
With its morning cup

The birds chirped
As the morning crisped
To please my ears
With their sweet hum

I popped behind
The mango tree
And peeped through the leaves
At the morning sky

Ripe as honey
Hung a mango
Which twisted my tongue
With its juicy yellow

My nose loomed
For the flower that bloomed
Which chilled my mind
With its sweet smell

Spreading the joyful fragrance
Blew the breeze
Without shattering the stillness
Of the bright new start

The breeze caught me
In its cool hands
Soothing my skin
From my nightly sleep

Fresh as a flower
I am to start my day
With a joyful might

That shined as bright!


paramveersaini said...

i must give you 9/10 for your work
i love poems and also sometimes write too.........and your' are amazing

Vineeth Sukumaran said...

"well I like your blog Immensely. Your blog is really adorable. do you have any other blog like this one. meet me at"

I think you are a genius!


Anonymous said...

i love this poem!! awesome blog!!

Nino Ortea said...

Hi, Femin!

Thanks for the visit, but mine is a blog where words take the main role, so, I guess you didn´t enjoy your visit as much as I´ve enjoyed mine to your space.

Keep up your great work!



Tie said...

Wow..I'been through all your blogs...very nice indeed. You love photography, like the pencils, the cakes and the beautiful birds and others...Unfortunately I'm not good at poems and don't know how to appreciate them. Nice knowing you and take care!!

Sacrava said...

Hi Susan,
Many thanks for your kind words.
Your Poem is excelent.
Bun H. Ung

VIDYA said...

hey :) this poem makes for some very good reading :)

anjoartes said...

agradeço a sua visita.
eu nao entendo ingles,mas imagino que seus poemas sejam lindos.
parabens pelo blog
tenha uma otima semana!

rakhi said...

nice poem...loving it!!!

Shalki Sharma said...

I find it the best way to express feelings!!!
I liked ur way of writing...
I'll soon complete that post on critical thinking...Will tell u after completing...

Maggie R said...

Brautiful Blog... I love your writings, and your Yummy Things along with the pencils and the birds.... Oh My you are such an artist in every way.. Congratulations....
I have so enjoyed my visit.

Carlie said...

Thank you for visiting my blog! Yours is beautiful and Yes! like you, I'm a bit sad to say goodbye to the old year but am so excited to see all the new possibilites of the new year. Have a wonderful one yourself!