Sunday, November 23, 2008

A friend forever

As I walk
And as I talk
I saw someone
Along my way
She does walk
Just like me
With a dark shade
Close to me.
I passed the hedge
With a lily
Along me, she moved
With a dark lily
I ran under the tree
Ops! Where is she?
I looked out for her
Has she left?
No way how could she
She is my friend
She may be hiding
Or else fooling around
She never did talk and smile,
How could she?
She is just a shape
Just like me
She never did eat
Nor did drink
She does come till my gate
But leave me alone at nights
She is a great friend
A happy friend
Who walks along me
Under the sunshine.

21 comments:

Robyn said...

this is a very cute blog!!

Webradio said...

Great and nice text !

Pretty the alone little kid...

See You later !

Yaya said...

beautiful

Trying to Stay Calm! said...

Thanks for finding my blog :) Yours is great :) ♥ Hugs!

paramveersaini said...

i dont know y but poem reminds me william wordswoth's kinda style.

Shannon said...

Thanks for stopping by my blog!

Encarna said...

Me gustaron mucho los poemas, gracias por darme un rato de frescura a tanto problema.

Kiran Sawhney said...

very nice. I am almost speechless.

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Susan :)

Very interesting post! Fantastic creativity! A lot of suspense!

Your strange friend will be longer – much,much longer - than you in the morning and evening. Try walking in the morning and evening and see how your friend looks like. During noon your wonderful friend will become shorter than you and try to take shelter under you. I am sure your friend hates darkness inside the house or outside.

I am talking about your shadow. I hope you also meant the same.

Many thanks for the lovely post which made my lazy brain jog a bit.

Have a nice day :)

sassy stephanie said...

How great!

Amber said...

Oh that is lovely,
Thanks for your kind comments.
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Take care

HOBO said...

Deep meaningful thoughts.
Claps !!!

Poopsie Blue said...

I guessed upur friends was your shadow very quickly but loved the poem!

Shadow said...

aaaah, your shadow... lovely writing! and thanks for your visit!

RiverSoul said...

You have a beautiful Blog here.
Beautiful
Poem.
I'm following you.
:)
Hope you do come to my Blog again.
:)
Siddharth (RiverSoul) of Silent Recollections
:)

Mithe said...

Great Poem.I loved it!:) Am blogrolling you. Hope you don't mind

Arv said...

Hi Susan,
They are something to admire on a hot day at the park or by the riverside... Shades of us...

well written... am glad that you found my blog...

Have a nice weekend mate... cheers..

Indian Home Maker said...

That's a very sweet poem :)

Steve said...

A poem with a very warm feel to it!

shri ramesh sadasivam said...

Wow, Beautiful poem Susan. :)

♥ bfs~"Mimi" ♥ said...

Sweet, innocent piece! Thank you for your comment today, and for spurring me on!