Sunday, November 30, 2008

Loving Nature

The sun shone

Up with a yellow tone

I planted some seeds

Between the green weeds

Sure enough I was

To water them though

I had to carry through

A picky grass hedge

My hands grew tired

My legs wounded

But still I cared

With my wounded heart

As two days passed

There came a green spot

With tiny leaves

As soft as fur

Yes! They were those

That I cared for so long

They have changed lot

From a seed to a plant

I gathered some twigs

And made a beautiful fence

So they were safe

Deep in my heart

Soon I saw myself in vain

I was locked up

My heart too was locked

With thorns all over

A week passed by

Then passed a month

My heart sang down

In my dry tears

Those strange days

Are over once again

I ran out with joy

But my mind was still lost

Then I passed the hedge

I saw some bright

Between the grass

With surprise I looked

Oh! It was my seed

Not the seed

Oh! It had grown

Up saw with a flower

This is nature’s magic

No, its nature’s love

So should you care


WarmSunshine said...

very sweet :)
nature is truly very soothing!

FCB said...

Hi Susan,
I enjoyed the jouney in this poem.
Good stuff,

Arv said...

Hi Susan...

Thats a lovely ode to Nature...

I wish people take better care of it... Have a good day... cheers...

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Susan :)

Your creative writing is excellent.

The amount of hard work that goes into gardening and to get a flower bloom, the suspense and frustration of the gardener and the surprise gift of nature are very well portrayed through simple, easy to understand words.

It goes to show that efforts,patience and perseverance will always be rewarded in the end. This, I think, is the moral of the poem.

Many, many thanks for sharing.

Have a great day :)

Anonymous said...

Great one again! Liked the quality of freshness in the poem. Please continue writing such beautiful stuff..You paint a beautiful picture with your words always.

Anonymous said...

very nice...nature is a wonderful thing!!

Anonymous said...

Your blog and poems are amazing !

keep it up :)

paramveersaini said...

fine words

Lena said...

a very beautiful poem! dont remember having read something that good on nature for a long time! :)

Anonymous said...

Very nice.
Claps !!!

Illeen said...

it's so beautiful.. very creative..
thanks for dropping by my blog.. :)

Bird, Frizzy and Our Little Yaya said...

I am in awe of nature both in spring and summer. Something about new beginnings and endings that just gets to me. Thanks for stopping by my blog. You have beautiful poems and photos here and on your other blogs.

i'm black betty said...

OMG!! that red-head is gawgeous!!!

shri ramesh sadasivam said...

Hi Susan,

Your blog is excellent. This poem is awesome.Keep writing, I'll come back soon for more. :)

Thanks a lot for your comment in my blog. I felt very encouraged.

venus66 said...

Such a wonderful poem. Loved it.

RiverSoul said...

Beautifully written.
Joyous is the term to describe my feeling
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S.V Bristol Rose said...

Hi Susan
Thanks for visiting my blog and for your kind words. All the best

Ms.Daisy said...

Thank you for stopping by my blog with your encouraging words! I love poetry and when I have more time I will stop by again!


LarryG said...

This is lovely!
When the sprout arrives in bloom it echoes the hope offered in planting!

When we experience sorrow in separation, there is sincere joy of restoration.

Thank you for sharing the song of your heart with mine!

Jan said...

Are you from Royal City by chance?

Trying to Stay Calm! said...

I am new here! What a great blog :)

Kaci said...

Hello thx for visiting Ellyphant!!! Awesome blog!!

Marja said...

Almost like a little story weaved into a beautiful poem.
Thank you for visiting me. You've got nice blogs

Cat said...

beautiful pieces here Susan!

Kai C. said...

hey susan,
thank you for stopping by!
:-) and happy holidays to you!

Joy said...

Susan, I really admire this poem. I've read it through twice and will read it a few more times to make sure I didn't miss anything. Thank you for visiting my SCSI blog. God bless you and Merry Christmas.

Theresa @ Take A Sentimental Journey said...

A great poem.

darsden said...

love, love, love your writing!

the poet manque said...

the journey of flower

wonderfully narrated


judypatooote said...

First let me say thank you for your kind comment that you left on my blog....I love your poem on Loving Nature....I feel as if I can look out my window and see that seed growing....I call all my weeds wildflowers for I do love nature even weeds....LOL and I do love poetry, and I write my poems on memories from my past, and I have them posted on my other blog. You have many blogging sights and I just went and checked out your veg. art, and it is adorable.....then I came here....I will be back,,,,,thanks Susan....