Sunday, April 26, 2009

Bathed in Starlight


As we add the happiness in life
And so do add the sadness of life
Well balanced, we get sum zero
A zero sum game, so is life

Sometimes we do bask in sunlight
And get involved with its glory
We do feel even worse for the night
Which follows every bright days

But we must admit, even in night
May be a new moon, dark might
There are stars to spot their lights
And make you glow all in dark

Even though you are dipped in dark
Don’t loose any of your little glows
Cause there are millions of tiny stars
To spare you with all of spotlights

33 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

This is lovely Susan! The last verse sums up the balance of nature beautifully if we but pay attention. A much enjoyed read.

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Lovely thoughts Susan very relaxing to read them.

Take care.

Yvonne,

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Susan :)

I have been looking for a starry sky but so far I could not locate it. When ever I up at the sky in the night it was cloudy. You are lucky to get a magnificent view and capture it for me. Beautiful starry sky. This sky reminds of the nursery rhyme;

TWINKLE TWINKLE LITTLE STAR
HOW I WONDER WHAT YOU ARE
UP ABOVE THE WORLD SO HIGH
LIKE THE DIAMOND IN THE SKY.

Although this is a nursery rhyme it is one of my favorite.

Of course, you are giving a valuable lesson to us in your poem. Not to lose hope in times of trials and tribulations when every thing looks dark and frightening we can still shine.

Have a lovely day Susan :)
Joseph

Chef E said...

You helped me escape! Thank you for your beautiful pencil and word magic Susan...I have not written anything that good in a while...

Heatherlyn said...

The first part of your poem reminds me of nirvana and perfect balancing. Life really does have a lot of opposites within nature, and living.

Life with Kaishon said...

Oh, I like this : ). A poem full of hope! I am SO thankful for the little spotlights the moon brings. Very enduring!

Cynthia said...

I love the words and sentiment. Beautiful!

Arv said...

I so feel this on nights where I star gaze lying on the floor.. beautiful one mate...

:)

have a nice day... cheers...

judypatooote said...

It's a beautiful part of life that is free...I so enjoy clouds and blue skys, and dark skys with the diamonds shining so bright...your poem is so meaningful....and makes one think.... judy

Think Tank said...

nice :)

pughy said...

Just lovely, sets you thinking. I enjoyed. Hugs GJ and Carol x

Destitute Of Experience said...

You inspire me to write better than before..
Its good to read about the heavenly bodies for a change, rather than the same old news and articles on net.

Thank you for letting me fly without wings for sometime.
;)

Creativity!! said...

Ohhh!!!!! So Beautiful fantastic Poem:) Very well pen down:) Excellent heart touching description......Thanks a lot for hsaring...u r an excellent blogger.....keep blogging...:)

Devika said...

Good thoughts, Susan

wishes,
devika

Q said...

The night sky is awesome. At night is when I see the vastness of the universe. It is in the darkness I find peace and hope.
Lovely poem and photograph.
Sherry

A New Beginning said...

Beautiful:)

dreamscapes said...

hi friend,

inspiring thoughts and a blend of nature.

-Aiz.

Sneaky Momma said...

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Daphine said...

Great thoughts! Loved reading this!

Margaret Cloud said...

I liked this very much. I like to stare into a night sky to see if I can spot anything new. When you look into a night sky it gives you the sense of how fast space is. Thank you for coming by.

Priya Joyce said...

this was lovely.
ver well put too
:)

oo7 said...

last one is my fav..
:D
take care and have a nice day

Vinz aka Vinu said...

:)

Great one..!!
Kinda 'self-motivational' stuff..!!

:)

Amrita~Ams said...

beautiful one dear...
loved the way u expressed :)

Nik said...

Thank you for visiting my blog! And i am glad you liked it...

I like this blog too..very reflective style of writing you have... I liked it!

Like this poem of yours... :)

Hope to see you around more..... :)

Cheers :)

Jeeves said...

Nice one:)

♥ Braja said...

Hey, FS...haven't seen you for a while :) Lovely poem...and lovely to see you :) xx

muthu said...

an interesting read.

Krishanu said...

Wow! Indeed your
'little thoughts' are enchanting. I just thought of sharing a bit of a verse on life:
We never have what we like,
We never like what we have,
Still we live & love & hope
That some day
We get what we love
Or love what we have.
That's Life.

tikno said...

I'm impressed with this post.

Nihal said...

Ooooo what a pleasure to be a part of your thoughts with this poem, Susan. Skies, words, feelings... all gives a magic touch, and a birth for the most delicious post to publish here by someone who is talented as much as yours.
Hope your having a day filled with star brightness:)

PS- Elizabeth organizes a poem festival, on May 11. I just thought maybe you'd be interested in join. Here's her blog:

http://elizabeth-aboutnewyork.blogspot.com/

Christi said...

Lovely.

Krishanu said...

Check my blog out!