This is lovely Susan! The last verse sums up the balance of nature beautifully if we but pay attention. A much enjoyed read.
Lovely thoughts Susan very relaxing to read them.Take care.Yvonne,
Hi Susan :)I have been looking for a starry sky but so far I could not locate it. When ever I up at the sky in the night it was cloudy. You are lucky to get a magnificent view and capture it for me. Beautiful starry sky. This sky reminds of the nursery rhyme; TWINKLE TWINKLE LITTLE STARHOW I WONDER WHAT YOU AREUP ABOVE THE WORLD SO HIGHLIKE THE DIAMOND IN THE SKY.Although this is a nursery rhyme it is one of my favorite.Of course, you are giving a valuable lesson to us in your poem. Not to lose hope in times of trials and tribulations when every thing looks dark and frightening we can still shine.Have a lovely day Susan :)Joseph
You helped me escape! Thank you for your beautiful pencil and word magic Susan...I have not written anything that good in a while...
The first part of your poem reminds me of nirvana and perfect balancing. Life really does have a lot of opposites within nature, and living.
Oh, I like this : ). A poem full of hope! I am SO thankful for the little spotlights the moon brings. Very enduring!
I love the words and sentiment. Beautiful!
I so feel this on nights where I star gaze lying on the floor.. beautiful one mate...:)have a nice day... cheers...
It's a beautiful part of life that is free...I so enjoy clouds and blue skys, and dark skys with the diamonds shining so bright...your poem is so meaningful....and makes one think.... judy
Just lovely, sets you thinking. I enjoyed. Hugs GJ and Carol x
You inspire me to write better than before..Its good to read about the heavenly bodies for a change, rather than the same old news and articles on net.Thank you for letting me fly without wings for sometime.;)
Ohhh!!!!! So Beautiful fantastic Poem:) Very well pen down:) Excellent heart touching description......Thanks a lot for hsaring...u r an excellent blogger.....keep blogging...:)
Good thoughts, Susanwishes, devika
The night sky is awesome. At night is when I see the vastness of the universe. It is in the darkness I find peace and hope.Lovely poem and photograph.Sherry
hi friend,inspiring thoughts and a blend of nature.-Aiz.
This is beautiful. You are a woman of many talents!Thanks so much for your interest in the Secret Sneaky Friend feature on my blog. Would you like to be a guest?If so, please tell me which Tuesday you would like to be a guest on my blog. Enough people have signed up that we will be doing this straight through to December, so if you have a Tuesday birthday or anniversary or other special day coming up this year, it might be fun to do it then. Believe it or not, we're already booked through to the middle of August. So, if you’d like to go sooner rather than way later, please set your date quickly.Any questions? Feel free to ask! Thanks again! Jill
Great thoughts! Loved reading this!
I liked this very much. I like to stare into a night sky to see if I can spot anything new. When you look into a night sky it gives you the sense of how fast space is. Thank you for coming by.
this was lovely.ver well put too:)
last one is my fav.. :Dtake care and have a nice day
:)Great one..!!Kinda 'self-motivational' stuff..!!:)
beautiful one dear...loved the way u expressed :)
Thank you for visiting my blog! And i am glad you liked it...I like this blog too..very reflective style of writing you have... I liked it!Like this poem of yours... :)Hope to see you around more..... :)Cheers :)
Hey, FS...haven't seen you for a while :) Lovely poem...and lovely to see you :) xx
an interesting read.
Wow! Indeed your 'little thoughts' are enchanting. I just thought of sharing a bit of a verse on life:We never have what we like,We never like what we have,Still we live & love & hope That some day We get what we love Or love what we have.That's Life.
I'm impressed with this post.
Ooooo what a pleasure to be a part of your thoughts with this poem, Susan. Skies, words, feelings... all gives a magic touch, and a birth for the most delicious post to publish here by someone who is talented as much as yours. Hope your having a day filled with star brightness:)PS- Elizabeth organizes a poem festival, on May 11. I just thought maybe you'd be interested in join. Here's her blog: http://elizabeth-aboutnewyork.blogspot.com/
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