The sun shone
I planted some seeds
Between the green weeds
Sure enough I was
To water them though
I had to carry through
A picky grass hedge
My hands grew tired
My legs wounded
But still I cared
With my wounded heart
As two days passed
There came a green spot
With tiny leaves
As soft as fur
Yes! They were those
That I cared for so long
They have changed lot
From a seed to a plant
I gathered some twigs
And made a beautiful fence
So they were safe
Deep in my heart
Soon I saw myself in vain
I was locked up
My heart too was locked
With thorns all over
A week passed by
Then passed a month
My heart sang down
Those strange days
Are over once again
I ran out with joy
But my mind was still lost
Then I passed the hedge
I saw some bright
Between the grass
With surprise I looked
Oh! It was my seed
Not the seed
Oh! It had grown
Up saw with a flower
This is nature’s magic
No, its nature’s love
So should you care
29 comments:
very sweet :)
nature is truly very soothing!
Hi Susan,
I enjoyed the jouney in this poem.
Good stuff,
Fred
Hi Susan...
Thats a lovely ode to Nature...
I wish people take better care of it... Have a good day... cheers...
Hi Susan :)
Your creative writing is excellent.
The amount of hard work that goes into gardening and to get a flower bloom, the suspense and frustration of the gardener and the surprise gift of nature are very well portrayed through simple, easy to understand words.
It goes to show that efforts,patience and perseverance will always be rewarded in the end. This, I think, is the moral of the poem.
Many, many thanks for sharing.
Have a great day :)
Great one again! Liked the quality of freshness in the poem. Please continue writing such beautiful stuff..You paint a beautiful picture with your words always.
very nice...nature is a wonderful thing!!
Your blog and poems are amazing !
keep it up :)
fine words
a very beautiful poem! dont remember having read something that good on nature for a long time! :)
Very nice.
Claps !!!
it's so beautiful.. very creative..
thanks for dropping by my blog.. :)
I am in awe of nature both in spring and summer. Something about new beginnings and endings that just gets to me. Thanks for stopping by my blog. You have beautiful poems and photos here and on your other blogs.
OMG!! that red-head is gawgeous!!!
Hi Susan,
Your blog is excellent. This poem is awesome.Keep writing, I'll come back soon for more. :)
Thanks a lot for your comment in my blog. I felt very encouraged.
Such a wonderful poem. Loved it.
Beautifully written.
:)
Joyous is the term to describe my feeling
:)
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Hi Susan
Thanks for visiting my blog and for your kind words. All the best
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Hi,
Thank you for stopping by my blog with your encouraging words! I love poetry and when I have more time I will stop by again!
~Jean
Ms.Daisy
This is lovely!
When the sprout arrives in bloom it echoes the hope offered in planting!
When we experience sorrow in separation, there is sincere joy of restoration.
Thank you for sharing the song of your heart with mine!
Are you from Royal City by chance?
Hello thx for visiting Ellyphant!!! Awesome blog!!
Almost like a little story weaved into a beautiful poem.
Thank you for visiting me. You've got nice blogs
beautiful pieces here Susan!
hey susan,
thank you for stopping by!
:-) and happy holidays to you!
hugs<3
Susan, I really admire this poem. I've read it through twice and will read it a few more times to make sure I didn't miss anything. Thank you for visiting my SCSI blog. God bless you and Merry Christmas.
A great poem.
love, love, love your writing!
the journey of flower
wonderfully narrated
kduos!
First let me say thank you for your kind comment that you left on my blog....I love your poem on Loving Nature....I feel as if I can look out my window and see that seed growing....I call all my weeds wildflowers for I do love nature even weeds....LOL and I do love poetry, and I write my poems on memories from my past, and I have them posted on my other blog. You have many blogging sights and I just went and checked out your veg. art, and it is adorable.....then I came here....I will be back,,,,,thanks Susan....
judy
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