Saturday, February 28, 2009

Endless Heights

The sky far flocking high

Is hard to touch on your feet
It seems so it never ends
As you move high up sky

Have you seen the edge of earth?
No not any of you
It’s even foolish to ask
But there is a truth behind

As much higher you reach in life
There are more heights ahead you
The higher you reach the more ahead
The heights in life never end

Thus once we are at heights
Should never end your fine of works
Cause there is more ahead
For you to reach to fulfill life



How I enjoyed this poem, very well written and a good content of words.

Take care.

अविनाश said...

Have you seen the edge of earth?
No not any of you
It’s even foolish to ask
But there is a truth behind

Excellent composition

the poet manque said...

thats what keeps life goin gr8 goin

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Great words Femin Susan and how do get others to read your blog more,i seems to have less and less readers.Great to see you here among the familiar grounds.

Janice Thomson said...

Oooh love that second verse Susan - quite profound.

paramveer said...

gud one..specially the being in the pic........matching with work of urs.....

Heatherlyn said...

So true! Good subject matter. Lovely poem!

lathaprabhu said...

Really Great Susan !!!

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Susan :)

Amazing poetry!You have truly excelled yourself. You have stated the facts of life very beautifully.

There is a saying:DON'T SIT ON YOUR LAURELS. You have magnified this saying in excellent words and apt analogies.

Please accept my hearty congratulations.

Have a nice day :)

judypatooote said...

Your a very good writer....true words....I love poetry....poems that make you think.... judy

Cascia said...

That is beautiful! Thanks for sharing.

Devika said...

Good verse, Femin


Amrita~Ams said...

kewl buddy.. :)
thxs for ur..visit :)
keep visiting :)

the poet manque said...

well shall i lie to u or tell the truth

pretention is something i am not good at


whoa!!! here goes another beautiful creation...sometimes i feel like the thoughts are soo deep while reading'em out i lost myself...good job....gud day then

Renie Burghardt said...

Ah, yes, keep reaching for the stars!

Lovely poem, Susan.

Hugs and blessings,


audrey` said...

You're a poet too, Susan =)

shri ramesh sadasivam said...

Its an excellent poem Susan. I just loved it. You've ended it as to say, How much ever we achieve we must keep going on because there will be more to achieve. I see also one more meaning in this, We should never try to seek satisfaction from our achievement but only from our work.

Cat said...

Loved this one

shri ramesh sadasivam said...


FCB said...

Hi Susan,
Such great truth in this small poem. You are quite the philosopher, and this poem speaks volumes.
God bless,

venus66 said...

Wonderful poem!

Anonymous said...

I liked the first two lines...
very nice femin-they give a clear view of the great poetry to come:)
I have written a poem too. I hope you see it on my blog

Illeen said...

perfection is conclusion.

beautiful words :)