The sky far flocking high
Is hard to touch on your feet
It seems so it never ends
As you move high up sky
Have you seen the edge of earth?
No not any of you
It’s even foolish to ask
But there is a truth behind
As much higher you reach in life
There are more heights ahead you
The higher you reach the more ahead
The heights in life never end
Thus once we are at heights
Should never end your fine of works
Cause there is more ahead
For you to reach to fulfill life
23 comments:
How I enjoyed this poem, very well written and a good content of words.
Take care.
Yvonne
Have you seen the edge of earth?
No not any of you
It’s even foolish to ask
But there is a truth behind
Excellent composition
thats what keeps life goin gr8 goin
Great words Femin Susan and how do get others to read your blog more,i seems to have less and less readers.Great to see you here among the familiar grounds.
Oooh love that second verse Susan - quite profound.
gud one..specially the being in the pic........matching with work of urs.....
So true! Good subject matter. Lovely poem!
Really Great Susan !!!
Hi Susan :)
Amazing poetry!You have truly excelled yourself. You have stated the facts of life very beautifully.
There is a saying:DON'T SIT ON YOUR LAURELS. You have magnified this saying in excellent words and apt analogies.
Please accept my hearty congratulations.
Have a nice day :)
Your a very good writer....true words....I love poetry....poems that make you think.... judy
That is beautiful! Thanks for sharing.
Good verse, Femin
wishes,
devika
kewl buddy.. :)
thxs for ur..visit :)
keep visiting :)
well shall i lie to u or tell the truth
pretention is something i am not good at
whoa!!! here goes another beautiful creation...sometimes i feel like the thoughts are soo deep while reading'em out i lost myself...good job....gud day then
Ah, yes, keep reaching for the stars!
Lovely poem, Susan.
Hugs and blessings,
Renie
You're a poet too, Susan =)
Its an excellent poem Susan. I just loved it. You've ended it as to say, How much ever we achieve we must keep going on because there will be more to achieve. I see also one more meaning in this, We should never try to seek satisfaction from our achievement but only from our work.
Hi SUSAN, HAPPY WOMEN's Day
Hi Susan,
Such great truth in this small poem. You are quite the philosopher, and this poem speaks volumes.
God bless,
Fred
Wonderful poem!
I liked the first two lines...
very nice femin-they give a clear view of the great poetry to come:)
I have written a poem too. I hope you see it on my blog
perfection is relative..my conclusion.
beautiful words :)
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