Thursday, February 5, 2009

Metamorphosis Of Life



Between the hands of hardship
And the hands of ever after joy
There hides a lot of truth
Which is hard to believe in deep.

Wrinkled are the hands of hardship
lines of hard work, care and sacrifice
Which all together can change the will
To be hopeful generous and kind.

While the hands of joy and pleasure
Smooth and plump with happiness
Forgets about the hardships in turn
Awaiting them for the future.

How can we change with time?
There are a lot we must intent
For the future that begins each day
This may help it turn to be good.

28 comments:

Cat said...

And each day is a new opportunity for change to happen!

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

A lovely poem which I enjoyed reading, there is much truth in what you write,
Also thanks for visiting my blog.
Take care.


Yvonne

Cynthia said...

Beautiful thought expressed so eloquently.

paramveer said...

so true words about life

LarryG said...

letting time change and mold is a mystery, the work it does.
great job of revealing mystery

Art and Poetry said...

Its very nice words indeed!

Marja said...

Beautiful words Yes we need the hands of heartship to learn to care and forget about the hardship with the hand of joy. Both are important

Arctida said...

So many lovely poems you've got here! It was really enjoyable to go through them...so much truth lies there...

and thank you so much for your kind words on my blog :)

Esterança said...

Thank you so much for the comment! I like your blog too and I love the beautiful stream photos.

kisses from Brazil,

Janice Thomson said...

Susan I enjoyed browsing your blog.
Like the underlying message in your poem - every day is indeed a new day to learn and enjoy.

Yaya said...

Wow, that is amazing.

Margie said...

Hi Susan
Thanks for your visit to my blog & your kind comment.
I've enjoyed reading your poems.
Very nice!

Margie

Anurag said...

nice words and thoughts there.. its hard to put this in verse category though...

Sandy Toes said...

Very pretty!
-sandy toe

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Susan :)

Very interesting poem and a lovely photo.

Very thought provoking and contains nuggets of wisdom.

Many thanks for sharing.

Best wishes :)

the poet manque said...

thought provoking
u never know when u change with every moment we are changing sometimes we dont lik them but still we resist but changes go on and so does life
cheers!

Mithe said...

The contrast is very poeticall and lyrically presented femin

Devika said...

Liked this one, Susan

wishes,
devika

rp.sahana said...

Marvelous Superb Heart Touching Poem!! Thanks a Lot for visiting my Blog & making me ware of such a beautiful awesome blog of yours!!:)
All The Very Best Success!!

Keshi said...

we r all changing every second!

nice writeup!

Keshi.

Amrita~Ams said...

lovely poem :)...knack..of it

NAVAL LANGA said...

Ms. Susan

You write that:
Which all together can change the will
To be hopeful generous and kind.

Yes, the hardships teach us many things; and the experiences gained are capable of changing our destiny, too.

Naval Langa

Shauna said...

Awesome! Hope you have a Happy Valentines Day! ♥ Hugs!

अविनाश said...

Wrinkled are the hands of hardship
lines of hard work, care and sacrifice
Which all together can change the will
To be hopeful generous and kind.


lovely composiition

Braja said...

Amazing photo....

Janie said...

I love this poem! Thanks for sharing...

SWAGATIKA SARANGI said...

luvely description yet with added picturesque...good job...wel u ve been tagged by me..plz go through my last post..
gud day then..

Bluebirdy said...

HI Susan;
You seem to have a LOT of fans! You seem to be such a kind lady, I was a bit sad when I didn't see any information about you in your profile. Who is the beautiful little girl that you use as a picture? Is it you when you were small, or maybe a daughter or granddaughter? Do you live in USA or do you live in another country?
Keep up the beautiful blog!
Blessings,
Bluebirdy/Sheila