Monday, February 16, 2009

Far Beyond….


Just within a glance at far
We see till the edge of plane
Beyond the grassy meadows in sight
Beyond the mighty slops down hills.

From the land a glance at sea
Would prove how long you would see
Till the horizon far away
Miles and miles from the bay.

Thus we are to give a glance
At the past that made our way
Just to see the track we came
Whether twisted or straight in line.

This alone could change your faith,
Your track to move ahead in life
Beyond the seas and oceans you move
Up to a flowery path to good.

33 comments:

everything burns... said...

wow...u just make the words flow so smooth...real good piece... :)

अविनाश said...

From the land a glance at sea
Would prove how long you would see
Till the horizon far away
Miles and miles from the bay

well composed

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

A beautiful poem Susan, very well written and excellent word content.
I enjoyed reading very much.
Kepp up the good work.


Yvonne.

Robyn said...

beautiful picture!!

Marja said...

A beautiful inspirational poem That flowery path looks inviting. Have a great day

Teri said...

I love this picture, the colours in the sky and the very vibrant greens. It just draws the eye up the path. Very pretty!

Teri and the cats of Furrydance

Devika said...

Well said, Femin..

wishes,
devika

the poet manque said...

i was in a trance when i read it

good goin

Creativity!! said...

Fantastic heart touching poem and liked picture a lot!!:) Excellet..Keep It Up!!:)

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Thanks for your visit, much appreciated.




Yvonne

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hi Susan :)

Lovely poem accompanied by a mind blowing photo.

I presume that you are trying to say that lessons from the past will serve as a stepping stone for future success.

Very well composed.

Have a nice day :)

Mithe said...

beautiful lines...
Thus we are to give a glance
At the past that made our way
Just to see the track we came
Whether twisted or straight in line.
What a depth of meaning in them Femin

Art and Poetry said...

The words do flow, nice one!

Janice Thomson said...

Much enjoyed Susan - a delightful pic to accompany your words.

Laura Rose said...

To me it looks like the rainbow bridge...that connects spirit to earth. Beautiful!

steveroni said...

Susan, that IS a neat-o picture, wondering if you are the artist? I'm using it for my desktop background, for a week or so--and so thank you.

I'm not much into poetry, although my wife Anna (http://oneprayergirl.blogspoy.com) does quite a bit of it.

Although your poetry is quite readable
I must say. I don't like the kind where I have to figure out the meaning. But that is MY defect, not amy author's. -grin!

Thanks for visiting my 'log, hope to 'see' you again.
Steve E.

Tabitha Blue/Fresh Mommy said...

This is beautiful, and I love the ending. It's amazing where you took the story!

:)
~Tabitha~

freshmommyblog.com

lathaprabhu said...

Hi Susan ,
All poems are really beautiful especially
I liked - The Wondrous Sun and A Nightly Companion

All the best . Keep on writing

lathaprabhu said...

Hi Susan , All poems are really beautiful.Especially I liked - A Nightly Companion and The Wondrous Sun
The pictures are very beautiful. Keep an writting All the best

Gauri Mathur said...

Beautiful...
:):)

Renie Burghardt said...

Wow, beautiful image and poem, Susan. Yes, looking back will remind us of our mistakes and successes.

Thanks so much for visiting. Have a happy weekend.

Hugs and blessings,

Renie

Renie Burghardt said...

Hi Susan,

Well, my first comment dissappeared, so I'm trying again. Hope you don't get a double.

Beautiful poem and image to go with it. Yes, the past will show us our successes and failures, and we can learn from it.

Thank you for your visit. Hope you visit again.

Happy weekend!

Renie

Shadow said...

hiya! you have some lovely poems here...

TheWritersPorch said...

What a lovely poem and the picture is just gorgeous ! Thank you for leaving kinds words at the Porch!
Carol

TheWritersPorch said...

What a lovely poem and the picture is just gorgeous ! Thank you for leaving kinds words at the Porch!
Carol

BJ Roan said...

Nice poem. I'll be back to read more later.

Megha said...

Wow, good inspirational poem :)
The pic compliments it.

Kai C. said...

beautiful poem
how r u?

Heatherlyn said...

I like your blog. The poetry and corresponding pictures are really lovely.

pam said...

I love your blog, thanks for stopping by and saying hi. I will see you again soon!

Margaret Cloud said...

Very nice poem, the pictute is very pretty, thank you for coming by, have a nice day.

Yaya said...

It's awesome!

Cat said...

You must know where you came from to know where you are going...