Just within a glance at far
We see till the edge of plane
Beyond the grassy meadows in sight
Beyond the mighty slops down hills.
From the land a glance at sea
Would prove how long you would see
Till the horizon far away
Miles and miles from the bay.
Thus we are to give a glance
At the past that made our way
Just to see the track we came
Whether twisted or straight in line.
This alone could change your faith,
Your track to move ahead in life
Beyond the seas and oceans you move
Up to a flowery path to good.
We see till the edge of plane
Beyond the grassy meadows in sight
Beyond the mighty slops down hills.
From the land a glance at sea
Would prove how long you would see
Till the horizon far away
Miles and miles from the bay.
Thus we are to give a glance
At the past that made our way
Just to see the track we came
Whether twisted or straight in line.
This alone could change your faith,
Your track to move ahead in life
Beyond the seas and oceans you move
Up to a flowery path to good.
33 comments:
wow...u just make the words flow so smooth...real good piece... :)
From the land a glance at sea
Would prove how long you would see
Till the horizon far away
Miles and miles from the bay
well composed
A beautiful poem Susan, very well written and excellent word content.
I enjoyed reading very much.
Kepp up the good work.
Yvonne.
beautiful picture!!
A beautiful inspirational poem That flowery path looks inviting. Have a great day
I love this picture, the colours in the sky and the very vibrant greens. It just draws the eye up the path. Very pretty!
Teri and the cats of Furrydance
Well said, Femin..
wishes,
devika
i was in a trance when i read it
good goin
Fantastic heart touching poem and liked picture a lot!!:) Excellet..Keep It Up!!:)
Thanks for your visit, much appreciated.
Yvonne
Hi Susan :)
Lovely poem accompanied by a mind blowing photo.
I presume that you are trying to say that lessons from the past will serve as a stepping stone for future success.
Very well composed.
Have a nice day :)
beautiful lines...
Thus we are to give a glance
At the past that made our way
Just to see the track we came
Whether twisted or straight in line.
What a depth of meaning in them Femin
The words do flow, nice one!
Much enjoyed Susan - a delightful pic to accompany your words.
To me it looks like the rainbow bridge...that connects spirit to earth. Beautiful!
Susan, that IS a neat-o picture, wondering if you are the artist? I'm using it for my desktop background, for a week or so--and so thank you.
I'm not much into poetry, although my wife Anna (http://oneprayergirl.blogspoy.com) does quite a bit of it.
Although your poetry is quite readable
I must say. I don't like the kind where I have to figure out the meaning. But that is MY defect, not amy author's. -grin!
Thanks for visiting my 'log, hope to 'see' you again.
Steve E.
This is beautiful, and I love the ending. It's amazing where you took the story!
:)
~Tabitha~
freshmommyblog.com
Hi Susan ,
All poems are really beautiful especially
I liked - The Wondrous Sun and A Nightly Companion
All the best . Keep on writing
Hi Susan , All poems are really beautiful.Especially I liked - A Nightly Companion and The Wondrous Sun
The pictures are very beautiful. Keep an writting All the best
Beautiful...
:):)
Wow, beautiful image and poem, Susan. Yes, looking back will remind us of our mistakes and successes.
Thanks so much for visiting. Have a happy weekend.
Hugs and blessings,
Renie
Hi Susan,
Well, my first comment dissappeared, so I'm trying again. Hope you don't get a double.
Beautiful poem and image to go with it. Yes, the past will show us our successes and failures, and we can learn from it.
Thank you for your visit. Hope you visit again.
Happy weekend!
Renie
hiya! you have some lovely poems here...
What a lovely poem and the picture is just gorgeous ! Thank you for leaving kinds words at the Porch!
Carol
What a lovely poem and the picture is just gorgeous ! Thank you for leaving kinds words at the Porch!
Carol
Nice poem. I'll be back to read more later.
Wow, good inspirational poem :)
The pic compliments it.
beautiful poem
how r u?
I like your blog. The poetry and corresponding pictures are really lovely.
I love your blog, thanks for stopping by and saying hi. I will see you again soon!
Very nice poem, the pictute is very pretty, thank you for coming by, have a nice day.
It's awesome!
You must know where you came from to know where you are going...
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